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MLP Surprise Creepypasta pag 48 (English) by j5a4 MLP Surprise Creepypasta pag 48 (English) by j5a4
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Cover and the beginning of the comic [link]

Party of One prequel to this comic [link]

 

I hope you enjoyed this comic, and I also hope to continue counting on your support to be able to make the final chapter.
Diagnosis: Surprise (Unofficial name)

And thank you all for your support.




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:iconmodelcargallery98:
modelcargallery98 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student Photographer
Will there be a next Comic? 
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:iconcreepycutiemark:
CreepyCutiemark Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New Deviant
You have a talent. The idea, the plot, the characters, and the comics themselves, of course, are made, umm, very very skillfully. You probably spent a lot of time teaching, or you're just a genius. People like you really need a fandom. It's all just what I could express in words (Sorry for my mistakes, I'm from Russia).
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:iconj5a4:
j5a4 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much, I appreciate your comment. greetings from Mexico. (My english is not the best either)
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:icondragonqueens:
Dragonqueens Featured By Owner May 6, 2017
this is probably the best comic about MLP I have read so far! Awesom :D
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:iconuknownviewer:
Uknownviewer Featured By Owner May 2, 2017
This is a crazy creepypasta. So many questions still not answered. j5a4 please continue making more of these. Keep up the good work.
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:icont-boneyo:
T-boneYo Featured By Owner May 1, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I don't care what disorder she has the only way to stop Surprise is to kill Pinkie Pie!
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:iconsilversentryyt:
SilverSentryYT Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017
i really hope it's coming more, i wnat to see pinkie pie it's okay, 
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:iconrain1234321:
Rain1234321 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2017  New Deviant
Hmmm... I know a game called pinkamena... Its on android, it was inspired by this :D
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:iconzeheal:
Zeheal Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2017  New Deviant
That's how a creepypasta should end.
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:iconlunchymunchies:
When will the next part come out?
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:iconprincessluna045:
PrincessLuna045 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017
More. More. The story must continue. 
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:iconteddygirl32:
teddygirl32 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
when is more coming out?
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:iconrandomelight:
RandomeLight Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017
This was an amazing creepypasta and comic. Also, what happened to Pinkie and the guard?...
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:iconjbm-deviantart:
DeviantArt Star! Star! Star! Star! Star! DeviantArt
WOW, Just WOW.
+fav: jbm-deviantart.deviantart.com/…
This creepypasta story is really good written (Just ignore all those gamma people, even my German spelling is bad but I don't care).
And you even explain all confusing thinks, like the easy breakable horns.
The only thing I wonder is: If you know that "Pinkamena" is her official name and not "Surprise", why did you call her like that.
Anyway, This is just great and I hope that you will get all the support you want to make the final chapter.
Have a nice day.
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:iconmesuyoru:
MesuYoru Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think he goes for Suprise, because Pinkie Pie's predecessor from G1 is named Suprise and she was pegasus.
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:iconjbm-deviantart:
JBM-DeviantArt Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017
Thanks I did'n know that before, I actually realized now that MLP is older than I thought.
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:iconpum6kin:
Pum6kin Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Student Artist
I hope that in the ending, Luna will find a way go back in time to reverse this horrible, gruesome event in order to save not just Pinkie Pie, but also everyone else that fell into Surprise's deadly trap.
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:iconxxxcatnameddogxxx:
XxXCatNamedDogXxX Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
: gives all the support :
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:iconlongshotswiftshadow:
longshotswiftshadow Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2017
You can't really ended there leaving us hanging what happened with Pinkie Pie and the royal guard he said she was still alive
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:iconsummerdancer101:
SummerDancer101 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017
I finished everything! I'm very very VERY interested in where this could go if you choose to make a threequel. If not, thank you for this, I like the premise and your drawings are great!
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:icongreenmachine987:
GreenMachine987 Featured By Owner Edited Feb 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You have my support to continue with this story. It can't end here! It's been getting really interesting. Please Continue!
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:icontinaart2305:
TinaART2305 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Student
Oh crap already the end! Bad end! Sad end poor Pinkie! THIS CAN'T BE THE END!
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:iconsammifox32:
Sammifox32 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I'll tell you Luna, let's just say.... YOU FUCKED UP BAD!!!
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:iconcuddlykanin:
CuddlyKanin Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017
It's over? but Pinkie isn't dead remember!??! But..But... THIS ISN'T FAIR!!!!
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:iconsammifox32:
Sammifox32 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
No she still alive, the guard found out she was alive and brought her to his home
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2017
Since when did he bring her to his home? O_o
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:iconsammifox32:
Sammifox32 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
On page 40 he mention I'll take care of you
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2017
Oh?

True, true.

Guard, you shouldn't have. You don't have the medicine she needs... :-S
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:iconrain1234321:
Rain1234321 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2017  New Deviant
A game naked pinkamena is a contunie, like everyones starting to diss ear a tn d changling start bechose almost everyones dead
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:iconprincessluna045:
PrincessLuna045 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017
What?! It can't end like this. There so much we still need to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconcuddlykanin:
CuddlyKanin Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017
WAIT!!  In the description they ask for support for THE NEXT CHAPTER!! THERE WILL BE MORE!!! WE MUST SUPPORT!!!
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:icondaraponypegasister:
daraponypegasister Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student
Amazing comic! I love it.
Keep up the good work!
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:iconthed0bermans:
thed0bermans Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017
Another chapter would be wonderful. We need to know how Luna deals with her discovery and fresh guilt, and how the other ponies of Equestria deal with her.
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:iconherdproductions:
HerdProductions Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Yeah they can...

Momentarily if you throw em off a skyscraper...
(Jokek
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:iconspiderbat16:
spiderbat16 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
*Pinkie style gasp*  Please tell me there's a sequel? There has to be!
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:iconheae:
heae Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
that ending sucked.
you left so many questions unanswered
please make a sequel 
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:iconrain1234321:
Rain1234321 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2017  New Deviant
Drawing skill? 
Its OVER 90-no...just no... Bad memes, bad, 
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:iconheae:
heae Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
bad, memes
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:iconmitz32:
Mitz32 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Student General Artist
sequel? it cant end like this :C
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:iconlightstar66:
lightstar66 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student Digital Artist
they just need help making the comic i think
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:iconmalos323:
Malos323 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Sequel? Please
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:iconlightstar66:
lightstar66 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student Digital Artist
i think they need help making the comic i think
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:iconhunterbrony101:
HunterBrony101 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist Filmographer
Well Luna, I hope you're happy.
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:iconreaper2545:
Reaper2545 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Make a another chapter of the crossover of the nightmare on elm street 
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:iconmiss-blank-27:
Miss-Blank-27 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
loved this and I really hope another chapter will happen X3 
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:iconkaylafike20:
kaylafike20 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
The end whyyyyyyyy?!
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:iconthed0bermans:
thed0bermans Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
The End!!!????? NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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:iconlightstar66:
lightstar66 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student Digital Artist
i dont think so...
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:iconshadowloverforever1:
ShadowLoverForever1 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
i look forward to the next part of this story. looking forward to the new chapter(s) ahead. i hope somehow luna can make it right again. i really do.
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:iconyoshitheaquarius:
YoshitheAquarius Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Student General Artist
Wow. what a cliffhanger.... I think :/
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