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MLP Surprise Creepypasta pag 48 (English) by j5a4 MLP Surprise Creepypasta pag 48 (English) by j5a4
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Cover and the beginning of the comic [link]

Party of One prequel to this comic [link]

 

I hope you enjoyed this comic, and I also hope to continue counting on your support to be able to make the final chapter.
Diagnosis: Surprise (Unofficial name)

And thank you all for your support.




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:iconsummerdancer101:
SummerDancer101 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017
I finished everything! I'm very very VERY interested in where this could go if you choose to make a threequel. If not, thank you for this, I like the premise and your drawings are great!
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:icongreenmachine987:
GreenMachine987 Featured By Owner Edited Feb 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You have my support to continue with this story. It can't end here! It's been getting really interesting. Please Continue!
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:icontinaart2305:
TinaART2305 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Student
Oh crap already the end! Bad end! Sad end poor Pinkie! THIS CAN'T BE THE END!
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:iconsammifox32:
Sammifox32 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I'll tell you Luna, let's just say.... YOU FUCKED UP BAD!!!
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:iconcuddlykanin:
CuddlyKanin Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student General Artist
It's over? but Pinkie isn't dead remember!??! But..But... THIS ISN'T FAIR!!!!
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:iconsammifox32:
Sammifox32 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
No she still alive, the guard found out she was alive and brought her to his home
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:iconprincessluna045:
PrincessLuna045 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017
What?! It can't end like this. There so much we still need to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconcuddlykanin:
CuddlyKanin Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student General Artist
WAIT!!  In the description they ask for support for THE NEXT CHAPTER!! THERE WILL BE MORE!!! WE MUST SUPPORT!!!
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:icondaraponypegasister:
daraponypegasister Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  New Deviant
Amazing comic! I love it.
Keep up the good work!
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:iconthed0bermans:
thed0bermans Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017
Another chapter would be wonderful. We need to know how Luna deals with her discovery and fresh guilt, and how the other ponies of Equestria deal with her.
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:iconherdproductions:
HerdProductions Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Yeah they can...

Momentarily if you throw em off a skyscraper...
(Jokek
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:iconspiderbat16:
spiderbat16 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
*Pinkie style gasp*  Please tell me there's a sequel? There has to be!
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:iconheae:
heae Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
that ending sucked.
you left so many questions unanswered
please make a sequel 
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:iconmitz32:
Mitz32 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Student General Artist
sequel? it cant end like this :C
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:iconlightstar66:
lightstar66 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student Digital Artist
they just need help making the comic i think
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:iconmalos323:
Malos323 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Sequel? Please
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:iconlightstar66:
lightstar66 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student Digital Artist
i think they need help making the comic i think
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:iconhunterbrony101:
HunterBrony101 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist Filmographer
Well Luna, I hope you're happy.
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:iconreaper2545:
Reaper2545 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
Make a another chapter of the crossover of the nightmare on elm street 
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:iconmiss-blank-27:
Miss-Blank-27 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
loved this and I really hope another chapter will happen X3 
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:iconkaylafike20:
kaylafike20 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
The end whyyyyyyyy?!
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:iconthed0bermans:
thed0bermans Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
The End!!!????? NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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:iconlightstar66:
lightstar66 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Student Digital Artist
i dont think so...
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:iconshadowloverforever1:
ShadowLoverForever1 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
i look forward to the next part of this story. looking forward to the new chapter(s) ahead. i hope somehow luna can make it right again. i really do.
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:iconyoshitheaquarius:
YoshitheAquarius Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Student General Artist
Wow. what a cliffhanger.... I think :/
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:iconagakikama:
agakikama Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I greet. Do what will become it with from 2 part related Pinkie Pie? Will forgive princess and if she Luna? Will make what for after in dungeon constant solid and it Supprise? 
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:iconphoenixflambe:
PhoenixFlambe Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Tell me it's a chapter. It should be I hope.
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:iconc-chell:
C-Chell Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
This can't be the end.
So many question left to reply.
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:icondynamo-clan:
Dynamo-Clan Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Hells Fire: We need a continuation showing the psychologist getting punished for not stopping all this mess.
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:iconwinged-stone:
Winged-Stone Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
It's not his fault though. He was doing what he could to help Pinkie/Surprise when all this just...happened.
Even he was caught off guard by it, because high aggression never took place before. No reason to suspect.
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:icondynamo-clan:
Dynamo-Clan Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Hells Fire: Well, he should at inform one of princesses of Pinkie's condition, seriously, watchlists for beings that suffer from psychological illnesses should exist.
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:iconwinged-stone:
Winged-Stone Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Emphasis on the "aggression never took place before" part. In many cases, people who are mentally compromised would rather live in peace than have people whispering about them like they were full on loons or something. Especially when their illness isn't shown to cause issues.
And he did mention doctor/patient confidentiality, which is sort of a big deal. Legally.

I get where you're coming from, but it's a thing of both ethics and red tape.
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:icondynamo-clan:
Dynamo-Clan Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Hells Fire: What is this "red-tape"? I kinda understand the ethics, and I said watchlist, such one as used by american agencies on "could terrorists" muslins.
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:iconwinged-stone:
Winged-Stone Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Red tape. Bureaucracy. Paperwork. You know...legal matters preventing one from just outright doing a thing. Because rules. And laws.
The doctor couldn't go and tell the guard to keep watch on Pinkie simply because she was mentally ill. He would get in trouble.

Before the sudden killing spree, Pinkie/Surprise seemed harmless and therefor had no reason to be on any watchlist.
And now that the killing has happened, it's just a matter of the guards being on high alert and grabbing her if they see her...which is sort of a non-issue at the moment, considering she's supposedly broken, nearly dead, and being carried away.
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:icondynamo-clan:
Dynamo-Clan Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Hells Fire: Never saw that nickname before, the torn pages have something on Surprise's definition of fun, probably that could show us that she was very unstable, but, because we can't get that one page to read it all, maybe your right, maybe I am.
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:iconjungledyret-2000:
JungleDyret-2000 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
I WANT A CONTINUANCE OF THE STORY!!!
Please, do it, J5A4!
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:iconno-time-for-caution:
No-Time-For-Caution Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohh nice capture. This page has something very unsettling... that was very good! However, I hope that there will be more.
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:iconluismipro465:
LuismiPro465 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Supongo que habrá una continuación, no? xD
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:iconcaptriskyboots:
CaptRiskyBoots Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I sure hope there's a continuation to this because it was getting interesting.
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:iconrickx231:
RICKX231 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
DAmn you cliffhanger.
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:icondarkbloodsflame:
DarkBloodsFlame Featured By Owner Edited Feb 3, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWaLxF… ! Not an cliffhanger.. Damn you. :P :P
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:icontarekalshaleh:
tarekalshaleh Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
To be contunied ?
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:iconshadowonwater:
Shadowonwater Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was so good!
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:iconmalzerwarth:
Malzerwarth Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  Student Artist
Didn't see that coming!
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:iconmorgan556:
Morgan556 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg we just got cliffhangered!
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:iconculu-bluebeaver:
Culu-Bluebeaver Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
Exactly. 
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